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©2005-2010 wrecktangle
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my first official resume. please critique this too.

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Very well done...The only thing that could use revision is the the last word "implement," I think it brings the sentence down. Maybe something like engage, excecute, practice. practice would probably work better...Just a suggestion...but very impressive overall....you should also add at the bottom....REFERENCES AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST...it adds a level of professionalism...well done.
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good call, man. i'm probably gonna revise it a couple more times. i should hit up a thesaurus and see about alternate word choices.

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